They were from two diferents worlds
and destiny put them together,
it was in a party in a place called "La Fabica"
my father asked her to dance.
When my father took her to dance,
my mother fell inmediatly in love,
her love was in their eyes
Unfortunaly he didnt have that sensation.
With the time he fell to her knees
And actually their love is the same at the first time.
Good work Delfi!
ResponderBorrarI see you´ve marked some lines but you forgot to include what literary device you´re using each time. Your poem is well built and allows us to get to know this love story step by step. Well done!
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