miércoles, 31 de julio de 2013


There were the five friends Shannon, Mike, Ginnie, Peter and Willie in the basement workshop.Three weeks later after of his adventure. 

Scene 5
(They decided to make graphics of the adventure and investigate for evidence that would show the world that they know another world and other people.All promised not to say anything about this adventure)

Willie:This adventure will be in our minds the rest of our life are you agree to not tell anyone about this?  (he ask while he was looking at the graphics)

Shannon: I am not agree but i wouldn't say anything (said sarcastically)

Mike: Yes I promise that I would not said anything but I don't know Shannon.

Shannon: what you are trying to said  that I can not keep a secret! (said angry)

Mike: Yes Shannon you understand perfectly way 

Peter: Everybody know that you can not keep secrets 

Ginny: Shut up! (shouting very angry)

Willie : Ginny is right  it´s not time to fight - Shannon you promise that you would not said nothing to anyone about nothing?

Shannon: Yes, I would not say nothing.(She open the door and she lived the basement of the workshop)








Willie: leave she will return 

Mike: It wasn't my idea she too lived

Peter: Yes we know Mike 

Willie: Know it´s time to work, I don't want more discussion 

Ginny: Everybody listen to Willie-to work 

Mike: yes but where are the graphics?

Peter: Shannon take it

Willie: I don't think so somewhere must be

(The other day Willie went outside and he saw copies of the graphics that they made on all sides and immediately he called their friend)
(Mike,Peter,Ginny but no 
Shannon)



Willie: I want everybody in my house right know! (He said very angry)

All: alright!

In Willie´s house:

Willie: Look what Shannon has did

Ginny: What has she done?

Willie : she paste all around the street all the graphics we do

All:  That she do what? 

Willie: You listen well 

Ginny: we don´t evidence to accuse anyone 

Mike:you know as well at us that was Shannon 

Ginnie: Why you hate Shannon she is a good girl ?
(she ask looking at the graphics ) 

Mike: I don't hate it she hate  to me(  he said very said).

Willie: It  doesn't  matter ! -  I want us   to find Shannon everybody have to think where can be?
Peter: I know where she could be ! In the park

Mike. yes everyone to the park!

(The four friends went to the park and Shannon was there lonely as a camel in the middle of the desert. I saw a sad expression in his face)
(Immediately when she saw as she run and she shout that  she was very sorry about what she has done  but her feelings  were more stronger than her thoughts. The four friends look at each other and Mike smile to Ginny and she ignored him)

Ginny: I am so disappointed I thought that she was a good person but I was wrong (said as a tear escapes) 

Willie: I am sorry for you  Ginny!- But know we have to think what we have to do with problems that Shannon caused.



They decide to went to the program.And they saw Shannon there explaining what has happened.And she said exactly this:  

I am my friend had discovered a new world that had new people “Mounters” that they calls Bits,Bytes and the Commanders but this people have a leader who calls Supreme Technocrat.This “Mounters” are people as us but his leader is too bad that they transformed in “Mounters” hypnotized. I and my friends have the opportunity to see this world.

When she was telling this story I listen some laughs and when she finish telling our adventure they can not stop of laughing.Immediately when she saw as she call as  when the tv program was recording.I was so embarrassed.

Willie: what are you doing Shannon?

The audience: look everybody the others stupid.

The four friends: we hate you Shannon! ( we shout very angry)

Shannon : I don't want this to happen …..

All this week we receive call laughing at us and calls of Shannon saying sorry.Willie and the rest of the friends except of Shannon.They planned  meeting .

Willie: know I don't want nobody to name Shannon yes?- And think what we can do.

Some minutes later Ginny started to speak and the rest of us listen very attentive and she said:

Ginny: if  we can't bring  them to the world we can bring the world to them.

Peter: yes but how?

Ginny: someone of us have to sacrifice his life and return to the other world and film that  I have a friend that have a tv program that is very popular and I don't think that he have some problems that we take some minutes of his show. What do you think about my plan?

Mike: yes but how will be the person that will sacrifice his life to go to this world? 

All: Shannon 

And this happened Shannon sacrificed his life.   

The day after it was 9 o'clock of the morning it was a lovely day, the birds were singing, It was sunny, the flowers were beautiful as you read before it was a lovely day but not for Shannon I don't know what was happening in Shannon mind but she looks very nervous.
Everything was ready the amplifier the cameras to record the program the only things that lake was that Shannon enter to the Technos world.Ten minutes later she was there. Everything was exactly like before, I was afraid that everything went wrong.Time after she saw the supreme Technocrat. She shout and he listening he and he said:

You again?- What do you want? (Shannon run or tried to run)-Bite stop her!

Shannon: No please no!

IN THE OTHER WORLD : 

Willie: She is in problem!

All: We have to help her...

They decide to went to Technos.  
They saw Shannon talking with the Supreme Technocrat. So they simulate that they were Bytes decomposed.They call the action of the Supreme and Ginny save Shannon so that the Supreme Technocrat do not get brainwashed. They run to the circle of the amplifier.And they return back to home,all the people that laughs about their adventure they can`t stop saying sorry. You don't know that Shannon have a watch with a small camera that film all what happened,a lot of people see it because it was in the internet everywhere and all the televisions around the world. 

The end


martes, 30 de julio de 2013

Formal Letter

Dear Mr. Stevenson,

I am writing this letter because I have some problems with the machine. I think that you made some mistakes that are unfair for me, for example the price.

First, I want to tell you that I am very disappointed because I thought that you were a little more intelligent. You gave me the machine in bad condition and more expensive that what it is. I will like to know if you did it on purpose. Because that is what it seems.

I would like to know if you could visit me so I could show you the problems, and if you could repair and give me the extra money I paid to you.

Your Sincerely 
Robert