jueves, 30 de octubre de 2014

Cheaters

In the subject of L/L Writing,we have to created a short story, we studied how to writed, and we have to end this story with this pharse; "And that was the last time she ever saw them."












And this is my story,
There was a group of friends who lived in the best conditions with different types of families that lived in London. The most important of this group was Maria, she was a very good friend. She was every moment of her life ready to help all her friends and she loved each of them in the same way. Also her boyfriend, Marcus, was part of this group of friends, that had a leader that was Maria. She was blond, tall, and a very nice girl but she became into another person when they had to take revenge on someone who hurt one of her friends. Marcus was a tall boy with a big heart, and also a good friend. Then it was Patrick, the intelligent one, he was like the dad of this group. Always alert. And the last was Sophia, that was the Maria best friend, she was short with shiny brown hair.
These four friends decided to go to Paris to spend their holidays all together. They had just one objective, to spend the best holidays of their lives. The first day was lovely and perfect, they went to the beach and Maria saw that her boyfriend was really strange, and that he was trying to escape from someone. She was really worried, so she decided to tell Sophia what was happening.
“Am I crazy or Marcus is strange?”
“Why do you say that?”, Sophia asked very surprised
“Because he is behaving in a very strange way”, Maria whispered
“I think that you have to be more secure about your boyfriend”
“I am not sure”, Said Maria
So Sophia called Patrick, “Maria thinks that Marcus is behaving in a strange way”
“I had never noticed”, Patrick gave his points of view
Maria decided to go to the hotel to relax, and think about her thoughts. She was really sure that Marcus was in something strange, so she decided to follow him, and she found him and her friends in a bar.
“What happened here?”, Asked Maria
“Nothing Maria”, Sophia said nervously
“It’s time to tell the truth, we cannot be a couple”, Said Marcus
“Why?”, Asked Maria
“Because I am in love with Sophia”, Confessed Marcus
“And did you know it, Patrick=”, Asked Maria crying
“Yes, but I couldn’t say anything”, Said Patrick
“All of you are bad people”, Shouted Maria

Maria was crying and shouting “I hate you”, and nobody saw her for years. I have never seen such pain like that. And that was the last time she ever saw them.