In the subject of L/L Writing,we have to created a short story, we studied how to writed, and we have to end this story with this pharse; "And that was the last time she ever saw them."
And this is my story,
There was a
group of friends who lived in the best conditions with different types of
families that lived in London. The most important of this group was Maria, she
was a very good friend. She was every moment of her life ready to help all her
friends and she loved each of them in the same way. Also her boyfriend, Marcus,
was part of this group of friends, that had a leader that was Maria. She was
blond, tall, and a very nice girl but she became into another person when they
had to take revenge on someone who hurt one of her friends. Marcus was a tall
boy with a big heart, and also a good friend. Then it was Patrick, the
intelligent one, he was like the dad of this group. Always alert. And the last
was Sophia, that was the Maria best friend, she was short with shiny brown
hair.
These four friends
decided to go to Paris to spend their holidays all together. They had just one
objective, to spend the best holidays of their lives. The first day was lovely
and perfect, they went to the beach and Maria saw that her boyfriend was really
strange, and that he was trying to escape from someone. She was really worried,
so she decided to tell Sophia what was happening.
“Am I crazy
or Marcus is strange?”
“Why do you
say that?”, Sophia asked very surprised
“Because he
is behaving in a very strange way”, Maria whispered
“I think
that you have to be more secure about your boyfriend”
“I am not
sure”, Said Maria
So Sophia
called Patrick, “Maria thinks that Marcus is behaving in a strange way”
“I had
never noticed”, Patrick gave his points of view
Maria
decided to go to the hotel to relax, and think about her thoughts. She was
really sure that Marcus was in something strange, so she decided to follow him,
and she found him and her friends in a bar.
“What
happened here?”, Asked Maria
“Nothing
Maria”, Sophia said nervously
“It’s time
to tell the truth, we cannot be a couple”, Said Marcus
“Why?”,
Asked Maria
“Because I
am in love with Sophia”, Confessed Marcus
“And did
you know it, Patrick=”, Asked Maria crying
“Yes, but I
couldn’t say anything”, Said Patrick
“All of you
are bad people”, Shouted Maria
Maria was
crying and shouting “I hate you”, and nobody saw her for years. I have never
seen such pain like that. And that was the last time she ever saw them.